It was a well published poem. One thing you could change is probably not have the slides change that fast, because you couldn't really finish reading the text. Overall, well done!
Casey I liked this video Rain, though I think you needed to increase the length of your slides! Also, I found that one of your pictures didn't really match the words. Another thing I found was that you used some pictures twice, it would have been better if you had used all different pictures. I liked your choice of music, it was quite neutral but a hint of sadness which is what your poems tone is. Your writing is a good size and you can always see it as it did not merge into the background. I also liked that you used the same font throughout the video. There were a few sentences that did not start with a capital letter, when all your other sentences did but that might be how the poem is, I'm not sure. I'm not sure why there is writing on the bottom of all your pictures, maybe you could have chosen ones that didn't have all the writing on them! Overall I did like this.
Hello. I think your published piece of work was way too fast. A few times I wanted to stop it from playing just to read the text. I thought the music suited the piece of work. Next time please do slow it down. In order to read the last slide I had to stop it and rewind it back. Make sure you don't overuse the same picture. Four to Five times maximum. Overall well done!
It was a well published poem. One thing you could change is probably not have the slides change that fast, because you couldn't really finish reading the text. Overall, well done!
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ReplyDeleteI liked this video Rain, though I think you needed to increase the length of your slides! Also, I found that one of your pictures didn't really match the words. Another thing I found was that you used some pictures twice, it would have been better if you had used all different pictures. I liked your choice of music, it was quite neutral but a hint of sadness which is what your poems tone is. Your writing is a good size and you can always see it as it did not merge into the background. I also liked that you used the same font throughout the video. There were a few sentences that did not start with a capital letter, when all your other sentences did but that might be how the poem is, I'm not sure. I'm not sure why there is writing on the bottom of all your pictures, maybe you could have chosen ones that didn't have all the writing on them! Overall I did like this.
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ReplyDeleteI think your published piece of work was way too fast. A few times I wanted to stop it from playing just to read the text. I thought the music suited the piece of work. Next time please do slow it down. In order to read the last slide I had to stop it and rewind it back. Make sure you don't overuse the same picture. Four to Five times maximum. Overall well done!