I think that your poem was alright although I do think that it would of been better if you had put in transactions. I think that the music was suitable for the song, and most of the pictures went with the lyrics. I do think that you used the pictures of clocks a little bit too much, and at the end when you wrote why you chose the song I didn't get to read all of the text.
I think that your poem was alright although I do think that it would of been better if you had put in transactions. I think that the music was suitable for the song, and most of the pictures went with the lyrics. I do think that you used the pictures of clocks a little bit too much, and at the end when you wrote why you chose the song I didn't get to read all of the text.
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